Yes, this is a balanced approach. Both the one-sided and balanced view are fine for a discussion essay. The only problem is with the student’s level of English. If a student’s level of English is low and they struggle to get clear ideas across, the one-sided view is better. You won’t necessarily get a higher score because you tried a balanced approach.
I want to ask you about the length of task 2 essay, will there be any trouble in going beyond 300 words? Sometimes it’s hard for me to confine myself within the limit 260-280 you mentioned in one of your videos, so if all my ideas are relevant and on point, would there be any problem?
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