Because the essay question is about negative impacts of two different things: society and individuals. So, I think it is positive for individuals and negative for society. This is clear positive and answers the essay question fully.
If I get a proverb in the writing section 2. shall I rephrase the proverb? I saw this in proverb question in opinion essay question section on your website.
: Think of something you have wondered about and write about it.
So you need to teach yourself to write a draft, scrutinize the draft, and revise and rewrite your paper turning it in to be graded.I don't want to claim undue credit for this work.
: Write a page on what you would do if you were a teacher for a day.
Each time I look at and readsample answers of writing task 2 like this, I feel like in serious problems, because I don’t think I can write something so good like this. I see I need to learn, improve and practice a lot my English skills. 🙁
Writing a good philosophy paper takes a great deal of preparation.
Could you give me a clear answer that how i can get band score 9 in ielts writing??
Please tell me what are needed elements.
Only then should you sit down to write a complete draft.
My vocabulary is not so good. I mean i don’t know about synonyms of word, for example detrimental. So what would you suggest me ? How can I do well on writing task 2 ?
: Write a page on what you'd do if you were the President.
We don’t use “cons” in formal writing. Also “cons result” is not a compound noun. To get a good score you will need to reduce your grammar and vocabulary errors which are currently at band 5.
: Write a page on what you'd do if you had one hundred dollars.
hey Liz , first of all i just want to say that i cherish you, this is such a great site, and i am learning so much from you, thank you very much, however i just need to ask you something about this task which i have rewritten it in my own words (kind of a practice ) : is it okay to talk about the detrimental effects of social networking sites but then adding another opinion which is : “that some people find it beneficial for example because it lets them explore other cultures and being exposed to new global ideas….”
Write a page on an adventure that you'd like to experience.
Absolutely not if you want band 9. You must use natural language, not phrases and sentences you have learned from an academic writing website or book. Never learn sentences to put in your essay. Each essay is written uniquely depending on the topic. Any learned sentences are not counted by IELTS. I strongly suggest you get at least one of my advanced lessons in writing task 2 so you understand not only the techniques but what IELTS is all about in terms of how it functions as a language test: